I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Miss Kyla.
Hi Kenneth I really liked your work it was so amazing you did so well. Keep up the good work!
Hi Kenneth i like the way you put your writing on the side way and i like the pitures that you pick you did well keep the good work up!!!!!!!
Hi Kenneth I like your amazing work Keep It up
Hi kenneth I like that you have paragraphs and you have describe the photo Iike that you and but lots of ideas in to your writing Maybe you should do a WALT and describe what you done.Well done kenneth that is go it like a poem
Hi kennethI like the way you used punctuative words describing what we did.I was next to you when you were writing it.I would like to explore more about the waka vouyage
Hi your work is cool and I hope you have some more work to share.
Hi kenneth I like the way that you have been specific in your writing and you have really thought of your writing and what you were going to say I hope you can change your work because u just copy and pasted `you work on to your blog.
8 comments:
Hi Kenneth I really liked your work it was so amazing you did so well. Keep up the good work!
Hi Kenneth i like the way you put your writing on the side way and i like the pitures that you pick you did well keep the good work up!!!!!!!
Hi Kenneth I like your amazing work Keep It up
Hi kenneth
I like that you have paragraphs and you have describe the photo Iike that you and but lots of ideas in to your writing
Maybe you should do a WALT and describe what you done.
Well done kenneth that is go it like a poem
Hi kenneth
I like that you have paragraphs and you have describe the photo Iike that you and but lots of ideas in to your writing
Maybe you should do a WALT and describe what you done.
Well done kenneth that is go it like a poem
Hi kenneth
I like the way you used punctuative words describing what we did.
I was next to you when you were writing it.
I would like to explore more about the waka vouyage
Hi your work is cool and I hope you have some more work to share.
Hi kenneth
I like the way that you have been specific in your writing and you have really thought of your writing and what you were going to say I hope you can change your work because u just copy and pasted `you work on to your blog.
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